10/23

Over the past month or so,  I have been reading the book Theodore Boone: The Abduction.  After reading a write a blog post, which you can read under my independent reading section.  Recently I have had my peers read my blog and make comments and suggestions, and I have read theirs.  I have participated and peer edits before, but I have not found them useful.  This one however, was super helpful, and helped me to find a lot of my mistakes.  My classmates helped me to realise grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, and gave me feedback on my blogs appearance.  I had forgotten to upload a typed post, thankfully they realised it wasn’t there!  Not only was their feedback pleasantly helpful, but I enjoyed reading their blogs.  I read a blog by my friend Lucio which is linked here, and I really liked the way he used descriptive language, metaphors, and quotes.  There is no doubt I will copy him in my own blogs!  This was a truly positive experience for me.